So, let's get the basics out of the way. MoS is a movie whose strength lies in its aesthetics. To be honest, that's essentially Zach Snyder's forte. He always creates visually striking films, regardless of whether or not they have the narrative chops to go along with them. For a film about Superman (or rather, Zach Snyder's version of Superman...more on that in a moment) would be remiss not to have moment to show off both the power and deft of movement of the titular character. There's moment in particular that stands out.
That moment is Superman's first flight. It's here that Snyder achieves the best scene of the movie (and maybe of his career), and truly shows his legitimate chops with visual storytelling. So much effective empathy is being conveyed that just thinking of it makes me a bit upset that the rest of the film couldn't reach the same levels of sheer joy. In this scene, he exits a large Kryptonian spacecraft and begins to truly push his powers to find his limits. There are leaps, first. As they grow larger and larger, you can see his face go from strain to real glee. At one point he gets extraordinarily high and can seem to help but laugh, and hoot, and holler. IT WORKS. We're brought into that head space with him. Up to this point, it had been clearly shown that Kal was conflicted about who he was and where he belonged (more on that a little later), and in this moment we see him truly opening up and using his natural abilities. For the first time, he's not worried about holding back, and so he's more comfortable than he's ever been. You can see that on his face. The culmination of this is when he finally takes flight, after all his unsuccessful attempts. He pushes himself, going faster and higher, until he's in orbit around the Earth. It's here that his place is taken from the metaphorical to the literal. In that image we, and he, and truly see that he is not of this world, but he's far more ok with that.
Now, beyond the purely visual aspects, it's clear there's a strong narrative undercurrent to that scene. It works because of what came before it, and plays off of those things as a sort of culmination. Unfortunately, the rest of the movie doesn't possess that same level of competence in storytelling. In fact, these narrative inconsistencies (not nitpicks, but major narrative roadblocks) are so numerous that I'm inclined to just list them:
- For nearly 2/3 of the movie, Superman makes a clear and honest effort to save people, whether they are kids on a bus, who some men on an oil rig, or some soldiers falling to their probable deaths. He even turns himself in to the Kryptonian forces that come for him, rather than the Earth be destroyed. So, most of this movie shows him to be this man who, regardless of the difficulty, will attempt to save and protect. Yet, during the biggest moment of the film, the siege upon the Earth by the Kryptonians, he seemingly goes against all of this. Rather than continuing to be who he was for the majority of the film, Superman decides to throw all caution to the wind and use the whole of the world around him to smash his foes. The major issue here is obviously the collateral damage, which runs counter to everything that is told of his character, up to that point.
- Tonally, Superman and Lois Lane kissing in the crater of much of Metropolis is extraordinarily tasteless. One could assume that hundreds, if not thousands, of people had died in a matter of moments. For the film to show us the massive scope of the destruction the Kryptonians dealt to the city, then to immediately have two of our leads have a completely unearned show of affection just seems to suggest that perhaps there was not as clear a vision on this as one would have hoped.
- It's a peculiarity that Clark's father tells him that he will one day use his abilities to help people, only to then much later question his desire to leave the farm, citing that their whole family had farmers for years. Did he change his mind at some point on Clark using his abilities to help at some point? Even more, this seems like a wasted chance at a strong motivation for Superman to save people. The loss of his father prompting him to always do what he can to help others. Of course, this isn't at all what we get.
- While Zod may be the antagonist in this film, his choice to terraform Earth to be more like Krypton and kill off all of humanity strike me as strange, given what we know of what happened to the Kryptonian colonies after Krypton's destruction: they all died out due to loss of resources. So, how exactly is Krypton supposed to rise again? There's no way to gather some of the same resources again. Zod speaks of going from outpost to outpost of the old Kryptonian colonies, but seeing they were dead from being cut off. Why do this plan at all?
Aside from these few massive ones, there are numerous smaller ones that jam up the production. Now, every film has some kinds of plot holes and contrivances. It's an inevitability due to the fact that we're only human. No matter how skilled a director, cinematographer, or editor you are, things will slip through the cracks. With MoS, we have something different. What we have is a product that is mostly focused on aesthetic and plot machinations. Really just the affectation of depth with none of the substance. It's ultimately that fact that brings down the whole of the film.